Script It

A thread kind of like One Word Story but with more than one word,like a film script,with actions and dialogue from characters,somebody does one part and another user would carry on in another post and so on,maybe it could go quite far or die straight away,i will start

(It is a dark cold night,Eoin and Ella come out of a restaurant after their first date,the meal was excellent and they got on very well,now they walk down an empty,dimly lit street)

EOIN: That was great,Ella,But i reckon the night is still young,where should we go to next?

Ella: Well, I like going to this club on Thursday nights, if you wanna come with? My boyfriend will be there, you should meet him, he's great

(Eoin, disappointed and shocked, reaches into his pocket and grabs his knife, he knew he was gonna stab her, but didn't expect to not fuck her first)

(Ella looks shocked as Eoin brings out the knife,before she can scream he stabs her to death,he looks about to see if anyone is around then he grabs her ankles and drags her down an alleyway,a man is already down there taking a piss,he notices Eoin with Ella's lifeless body)

MAN: Here,what you doing?

(((Eoin's thoughts: Fuck, should I kill him too?)))
Eoin, approaching the man, dropping Ella's body: Er...oh fuck it, I killed this bitch because she has a boyfriend, and I dragged her down this alley to fuck her lifeless body. If you have a problem with that, you can fuck off or you'll be next, and yes, I'll fuck your dead body too.

After a moments pause, the MAN, shocked: This is a joke right? Because I've just killed this whore who refused to fuck me, I'm pissing on her now, as I've just fucked her. Need any help with your bitch?

(Eoin looks a bit relieved now)

EOIN: Sure,we got something in common here huh?

(but Eoin and the man do not know that a man in a car parked further down the alley has seen it all,he quietly gets out the car and heads into a club to tell his boss,the pimp of the dead prostitute)

The Man in the car, CHRIS, walks menacingly through the club, pushing dancers out of his way as he strides to the back. There, he pushes the security out of the way and head's into the back room, where TONY (the pimp and club owner) is fucking a young blonde bitch, on the desk.

CHRIS: Boss...boss, stop fucking Sandra, we got a serious fucking problem.

TONY, still fucking Sandra, panting: What is it?

CHRIS: It's Lucy...some cunt has just fucked her

TONY, laughing: So? Isn't that the bitches job?

CHRIS, with empahsis: No boss, she got fucked, she...

TONY, pushing Sandra off his dick, who falls to the floor, naked: Where is she? By who? Who the fuck was it? She was our best earner

CHRIS: Two geezers down the alleyway,another seems to have killed another woman as well,right couple of sickos

TONY: Right,we will sort them,get Basher

(Chris grins)
CHRIS: Right boss,Basher will sort out these two tossers

Chris struts out the room, and heads to the bar. He steals someone's shot, and walks off to a private room in the club where Basher is. Opening the door, Chris sees Basher beating the living shit out of a random guy.

CHRIS: Bash....Bash....oi Basher! Fuck this guy, we have 2 cunts down the alleyway we need to sort out.

Basher: Alright mate

Basher spits on the beaten man as he leaves with Chris. As they are about to leave the room, Chris turns to Basher, smiles and says: Don't forget your axe

(back out in the alleyway,Eoin and the man are trying to stuff Ella's body into a dustbin)

EOIN: This is hopeless

MAN: Should cut her up into pieces

EOIN: No time for that,look

(the man looks and sees Basher with his ax walking quickly up the alleyway towards them)

As the MAN looks up, he seems CHRIS and BASHER approaching, and he sees that one of them as an axe in his hands.

He turns to EOIN and says: Ok here's what we do...

Suddenly the MAN punches EOIN in the stomach, gets him to the ground and proceeds to beat the shit out of him. CHRIS & BASHER run up to the fight, see what's going on and laugh.

BASHER: Nice work DAN!

DAN: It's time for you to do what you do best Bash.

As CHRIS & DAN hold EOIN down, BASHER lifts his axe, and brings it down....